Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Through history, there are numerous events that have changed our
knowledge
and achievements. Some people believe that these developments were nothing else than our society evolving from ignorance. Others, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, believe that every ancient culture had its greatness and achievements which should not be dismissed.
Previously regarded achievements, Linking Words
such
as inventing the Linking Words
weel
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wheel
achievements
, as Suggestion
achievers
achieved
achievable
these
happened trough trial and error, rather than true and exact science. According to denotes a person or thing
this
this
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comes
after profound thinking and planning which indicates Suggestion
come
knowledge
. Events that happened by chance, Use synonyms
such
as realizing Linking Words
earth's gravity
or finding the dark matter, are a result of normal education and cultural development, and should not be looked Suggestion
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as true achievement.
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upon
In contrast
to the previously stated belief, many people think that every major finding should be appreciated and valued, and should not be Linking Words
critisized
retrospectively. find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticized
criticised
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although
we are well aware that the earth is round, during Linking Words
ancient time
, it was believed by all major scientists it is flat. Suggestion
ancient times
the ancient time
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that, Suggestion
emphasizes
emphasize
is emphasized
emphasized
emphasise
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which is Use synonyms
considred
elementary carefully weighed
considered
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, was Suggestion
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revolutiionary
in previous times and should not be overlooked.
In my opinion, considering ancient cultures as ignorant is foolish and unwise. All our markedly new or introducing radical change
revolutionary
evolutionary
knowledge
is based on previous findings. To illustrate, the internet is based on computers, and computers require electricity, an achievement made 100 years ago. Use synonyms
This
illustrates, that the greatest findings of our time Linking Words
relies
on previous achievements and, as a consequence, is equal in its importance.
In conclusions, every society has its own great findings and development which Suggestion
rely
are based
on previous achievements. We should learn to value previous scientists and inventors, because they paved us the road to reach new achievements.Suggestion
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