Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: 1). Explain why you have moved. 2). Describe the new house. 3). Invite your friend to come visit.

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Dear Nathan, Hope you’re doing great.
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we haven’t been able to speak since the
last
time we met, I’ve been very busy with work. You remember when I told you that where I was living was becoming inconvenient for me
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because a new
night club
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has just been open there and the noise coming out of the building at night is making me
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be uncomfortable. Well, I just want to tell you that I have relocated. I moved into a new
three bedroom
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house that has just been newly developed.
This
building is located about 5km from my initial place. Each of the rooms in the house has its own bathroom and toilet, a study area, laundry room, kitchen and dining.
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, there’s a space outside that I can park my car. The good thing about the area is that it is more peaceful with nice gardens. I am inviting you to
come
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see my new house, there’s an annual festival of culture coming up
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October 15th and the venue is the City Hall which is not too far from my place. We could use the opportunity to attend the festival together. I’m sure it will be fun, as there will be plenty to eat and drink. Get back to me as soon as you can. See you soon. Oghenevwede
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