On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the company – describe the item lost – explain how you lost it – tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I lost my item when I purchased your travel. My name is Ajik I am your VIP

costumer

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customer

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and I have a problem when I was on

trip

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a trip

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with your company yesterday so I have a crucial Item it is a smartphone and I have a lot of vital data into my phone,

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why, I am sending

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letter to gain more details information from your firm. I lost my item when I left your fast boat,

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many guests were diving to see a beautiful fish and blue corral around a small island my friend namely Jhon did not join to enjoy a variety of fish and turtles, so when I finished your trip I reminded something

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as a phone is lost, and I am trying to call my phone but there is no result. So , I am afraid of

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situation at the moment because I have many important contact numbers. I hope you can be responsible for

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issue and if you need more details you can contact me by WhatsApp. Yours faithfully, Ajik

Arni Aqlina

Jun 9, 2025

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Make sure to clearly identify your item in the first paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Use paragraphs to separate different ideas clearly.

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Make your request clearer at the end. State exactly what you want the insurance company to do.

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Check your spelling and grammar for clarity.

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You clearly described how you lost your smartphone.

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You've shown your need for help well, which is important in this type of letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
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