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Family who sent their children to private school should not be require to pay taxes that support the state education system

#children #school #taxes #support #education #system
Private
school
 is more favourable than
state
school
on
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in
with
 the belief of its better
education
 and superior
school
 faculty resources. It is arguably that families whose children are educated in private schools should be exempted from some portions of
tax
 that are applied to support the public
school
system
. While for my personal
opinion I
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opinion, I
 disagree with
this
 argument.
Firstly
,
tax
-free for families who put their pupils into private schools seems unrealistic considering the complexity of calculation of
tax
.
This
 calculation
issue not
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issue, not
 only comes from the
government
side but
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side, but
also
 from the
residents
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residents'
 side which means it will be a bureaucratic process for
government
 to determine the statistic that are spent on
state
school
system
 and the
tax
 threshold for citizens earning different income categories will be too complicated to reconsider.
Secondly
, it is an obligation
for
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of
 all citizens to pay
tax
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taxes
to
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for
 funding public services no matter if they are
benefit
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benefiting
 from the services or not.
For instance
,
government
 spends
large amount
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a large amount
large amounts
 of money funded by
tax
 on infrastructure construction and maintenance
such
 as on public parks, roads and entertainment facilities. People cannot refuse
paying
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to pay
tax
 just because they are not taking
advantages
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advantage
 on these services.
Similarly
,
state
school
system
 plays a vital role
on
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in
 children's
education
. Every citizen is obliged to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 his/her duty by paying the
tax
. In conclusion, both families who send their children to private schools and public schools should equally share the responsibility of supporting the
state
education
system
. It is hopeful that with the effort of
government
 and residents,
state
education
system
 could be improved into
more sophisticated stage
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the more sophisticated stage
a more sophisticated stage
.
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