nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company. why might be this case? what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? give your reasons for answer

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Having
self-employed
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a self-employed job
job
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for some people is an important aim and they try to work for
theirself
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their self
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of working for
athers
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
.
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essay will examine
agvantages
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the advantages
advantages
and disadvantages of
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argument and
expond
extend in one or more directions
expand
expands
my opinion. There are some main reasons why people are choosing to become self-employed.
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of all, as the world is going to be more complicated with new invitation and technology
,
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,
the
cometition
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
between people are growing. So some people prefer to have their own business to be more free from
cmpetitive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
situation and environment. Secondary, wake up early morning everyday to be on time at work and send reports and results of work to a
superviser
one who supervises or has charge and direction of
supervisor
or manager is really
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
for some adults. Even they
can not be relax
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can not be relaxed
on the weekend because of having deadlines and other duties. These problems make them more motivated to have their own
intrepreneur
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
.
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However having
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However, having
own business it does not mean that you can be always successful and well-being.
This
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kind of
job
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most of the time need a big investment to be successful. Many people lose their own
job
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because of some economic reasons, having no enough
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
or good idea
for instance
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, one of my friends opened a new restaurant with high quality of different type of
foods but
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foods, but
his
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
was not enough and he did not too much
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
for
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of
running a luxury restaurant and
afther
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
after
one
years
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year
he bankrupt. In conclusion, to me, every kind of jobs, if you are self-employed or
employer
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employed
, you must manage your mind and do something to help you to reduce your stress and having a more enjoyable time with your
job
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • work-life balance
  • constraints
  • traditional job
  • steady income
  • responsibility
  • expertise
  • establishing
  • isolation
  • support network
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