Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country make the country develop faster. Do you agree?

It is commonly thought by many individuals that if people from various countries and cultural beliefs are staying together in the same nation, it will result in speedy progress of that
country
. In my opinion, I totally disagree that if people from several nationalities and cultural perceptions reside together
,
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,
it would result in faster development of that
country
.
Firstly
, individuals from different countries and cultural beliefs, staying in the same
country
tend to have disputes
.
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.
This
is because of the different views they
have regarding
Suggestion
were regarding
have regarded
are regarding
have been regarded
were regarded
particular aspects of life,
such
as religious ideologies. A 2018 special survey by the West African bureau of statistics uncovered that several disputes were recorded in the region
as a result
of persons from different countries who have conflicting religious beliefs.
This
reveals the extent to which people living in the same
country
with several religious perceptions has a deleterious effect.
Secondly
,
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,
the level of unemployment in the
country
would highly increase.
This
is
as a result
of some companies retrenching their staff in order to accommodate the migrants and
this
would significantly increase the lack of paid jobs in that nation.
For example
, in Nigeria
,
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,
a lot of workers were sacked and expatriates were recruited for the positions since the government
believe
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believes
they are more skilled and
this
resulted in massive unemployment in the
country
.
Finally
, it is quite certain that influx of people from different countries would cause insufficient accommodations for both migrants and citizens.
This
trend would continue if nothing significant is done urgently.
This
notion is supported by a 2016 report by New York times which showed that there has been a 60 percent decrease in
avaliable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
houses for residents, most of which is attributed to several people from different countries coming to live in the same
country
. To conclude, in as much as having people from different countries and cultures has its benefits, the deleterious effects are far more obvious in my opinion.
This
is because it would result in conflicts, high level of unemployment and insufficient housing.
This
will negatively affect the growth of any nation.
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