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Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #newspapers #media #information #internet #source
In today's modern
world having
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world, having
right inforamation
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the right information
right information
 is
key part
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a key part
to
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of
 life. Regarding to
this
 some people
advocat
push for something
advocate
advocated
advocates
 the view that
newspaper
are
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is
 the most reliable source for getting
necesscity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
 details regarding what is happening around the
world
.While other are opposing
this
 view by supporting the argument of
internet
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the internet
 is
great place
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a great place
 to have all the information.
This
 essay will discuss both the side of arguments before giving my opinion. On the one side, there are people who are supporting argument of
newspaper
 are
most efficient source
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the most efficient source
 for getting information. There are numerous
reason
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reasons
 to support
this
 statement.
First
 and
formost
ranking above all others
foremost
 is
newspaper
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a newspaper
 is
very traditional way
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a very traditional way
 of
get
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getting
 to know
whaat
what thing
what
 is happening around the
world
. Before any technology advancement
newspaper
 is
solo candidate
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a solo candidate
 for getting any kind of details. Over the years
,
Accept space
,
it's
evolve
Suggestion
evolved
 not only with news but
also
 with
attractive advertisment
Suggestion
an attractive advertisement
attractive advertisement
attractive advertisements
 for products, with job opportunities and etc.
Secondly
, people are so addicted to
this
newspaper in
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newspaper, in
modern
Suggestion
the modern world
world
 too.
On the other hand
,
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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