Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

The trend of grandparents being responsible for bringing up their grandchildren is being increasingly witnessed these days. In

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is largely a positive development even though there are a few potential and minor drawbacks associated with

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development. There are numerous compelling reasons why looking after their grandchildren is beneficial for grandparents and the prominent one is that youngsters can be a good

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for the elders as their children tend to have a hectic work schedule in order to keep up with the fast development of the society, so they won’t able to spend enough time with their family which could have detrimental effects to the old generation’s mental health.

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, a recent survey conducted in Japan has revealed that the elders who lack

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companionship always suffer from various illnesses,

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as depression and insomnia.

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, they can benefit a lot from taking care of the children.

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, every coin has two sides. The main negative consequence of

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tendency is that older people may struggle to control and discipline the young generation as it is

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very exhausting work to do. Take myself

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, my niece has been living with my parents for 3 years because her parents always work overtime and it is difficult for my parents to help my niece

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her homework on time every day.

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, the elders can be adversely affected by

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tendency.

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, youngster being raised

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by their grandparents is ubiquitous in recent years. Taking everything into consideration, I’m inclined to say that the positive points of

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trend surpass the negative aspects.