Many people believe that the increase presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for rising incident of violent crimes among youth society. They argue that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this arguments

The rate at which violent crimes

is increasing

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are increasing

in our society is alarming.

while

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While

many individuals believe that the rise of violent crime is

as a result

of films and

television

, and that the governments should have a responsibility to control the media so as to minimize

the the

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the

phenomenon. I strongly agreed with the statement because the youths are more sensitive to what they see,

also

at a tender age, they believed that what they are watching could be practise in reality.

Firstly

, the

youth

have a flexible mind, and could be easily be motivated by what they see or ear.

some

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Some

criminal films being

displace

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displaced

on

television

for entertainment and to teach lessons are being seen as an opportunity by the

youth

to practise crime.

for

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For

example, statistics

shows

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show

that 50% of the criminals caught

confessed

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confessing

that they learnt their strategies from films.

Secondly

,

youth

are more prone to the negative

part

of a

television

shows

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show

than the positive

part

of it. Nowadays, because the

youth

are

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is

more interested in having their

ways

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way

withing

internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of

within

the shortest period of time, they concentrated to the negative

part

of a film to learn more crimes than the positive

part

. A recent interview conducted shows that an average

youth

watch some

television

stations meant for the adult while their parent are far away. In conclusion, I concur that the films and televisions are contributing to the high

criminal

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crime

rates, and I believed the governments can control the

medial

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media

to a large extent so as to reduce the phenomenon.