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Many people believe that the increase presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for rising incident of violent crimes among youth society. They argue that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this arguments

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The rate at which violent crimes
is increasing
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are increasing
 in our society is alarming.
while
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While
 many individuals believe that the rise of violent crime is
as a result
 of films and
television
, and that the governments should have a responsibility to control the media so as to minimize
the the
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the
 phenomenon. I strongly agreed with the statement because the youths are more sensitive to what they see,
also
 at a tender age, they believed that what they are watching could be practise in reality.
Firstly
, the
youth
 have a flexible mind, and could be easily be motivated by what they see or ear.
some
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Some
 criminal films being
displace
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displaced
 on
television
 for entertainment and to teach lessons are being seen as an opportunity by the
youth
 to practise crime.
for
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For
 example, statistics
shows
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show
 that 50% of the criminals caught
confessed
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confessing
 that they learnt their strategies from films.
Secondly
,
youth
 are more prone to the negative
part
 of a
television
shows
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show
 than the positive
part
 of it. Nowadays, because the
youth
are
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is
 more interested in having their
ways
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way
withing
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 the shortest period of time, they concentrated to the negative
part
 of a film to learn more crimes than the positive
part
. A recent interview conducted shows that an average
youth
 watch some
television
 stations meant for the adult while their parent are far away. In conclusion, I concur that the films and televisions are contributing to the high
criminal
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crime
 rates, and I believed the governments can control the
medial
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media
 to a large extent so as to reduce the phenomenon.
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