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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic ability or others believe that it is a better to have a student with the different abilities study together discuss both the views and give your opinion

#people #schools #students #ability #student #abilities #study
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 various educational abilities are better to do study in the same class
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 believes that school should choose a
student
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level
 but I strongly support the idea of a
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ability
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more impactful
.
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as a result
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student
 do very hard work and achieve a good school secondary choosing the students according abilities have a better confidence
level
 and likely to perform well in their particular
ability
 subjects. Many people believe that together with the various
ability
 students learn a different subject through the help of their other classmates and they
also
 share their knowledge
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 other
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students, which
 helps them to gain their knowledge and improve their own skills
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education
level
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