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Some people think that children should attend extra classes outside the school others say that they should be allowed sometime for playing .discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Although
 some people think that extramural classes should be attended by pupils
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others believe that the children should have
free
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a free period
free periods
period
 to play sometimes
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This
 essay will discuss both views
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in my opinion
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I believe children
shoild
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 have leisure time to play as
this
 helps in the relaxation of mind and body. On the one hand
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those that people that children should attend extra classes base that argument on the fact that the pupils are taught topics
on
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in
at
 the
next
 grade.The classes
teaches
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teach
are taught
 them topics ahead of their present class using the educational
calender
a system of timekeeping that defines the beginning and length and divisions of the year
calendar
 and curriculum
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This
 will result in the pupils acquiring idea about the topic before it’s taught in regular classes
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For instance
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in Edo
state there
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state, there
 is a popular lecture
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 for summer
school
 called scholars lecture
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,
students attend during holidays to gain knowledge for the
next
 grade.
This
 enables the slow learners to cope better when
school
 resumes.
grade
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Grade
.
This
However
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I do not agree with
this
 opinion because children can still meet up with academic work the way the curriculum is designed.
On the other hand
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,
other people believe that children need their leisure
period
 after
school
 to engage in playing with peer groups to re-energize their mind and body
This
 will help them relax after
school
 by engaging in activities that gives them pleasure
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 An example is playing football
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,
children
finds
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find
 it so much fun and they enjoy themselves while keeping fit
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 In conclusion
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while there are different opinions
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I
be live
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will live
lived
am living
was living
have lived
 that children should use their free
period
 to play sometimes as
this
 will enable them relax their brain after a stressful
period
 at
school
.
Accept space
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