Some people think that the media(such as newspaper) should be allowed to publish information about people's private lives. Other, however, think that there should be controls to stop the media publishing this kind of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Confidential matters, of some individuals, are being transmitted these days by some means of mass communication.
Although
this
essay will
firstly
discuss the views of the section of the society that favours the above trend, it will
also
further
elucidate the reasons of why I stand with the other demographics, who presume that there should be a proper check to put a halt to
such
activities. Admittedly, the connection between the celebrities and media is symbiotic, as both depend upon each other for existence. As some famous personalities can use media to fuel their growth, so it is fair enough for the vice versa to happen.
Moreover
, by watching disasters happening in someone’s personal life, others might get aware about the repercussions of certain wrong steps and can avoid taking these.
This
will lead to less unsuccessful decisions for the viewers.
On the other hand
, demeaning anyone is unethical. Everyone has flaws;
this
trend must be condemned. Imagine a group of photographers or
camera-men
a photographer who operates a movie camera
cameramen
cameraman
chasing an individual everywhere 24/7, would he feel safe?
This
immense power with some corrupt channels can be misused,
for instance
, for providing undue benefits a political organization by
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
sharing negative personal issues of opposition leaders.
Further to support my
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To further support my
Further support my
view, if the lavish lifestyles are over shown by the media, normal people may suffer from inferiority complex. People try to imitate the dressing, eating and celebration style of rich people, which may result negatively for their own future. To exemplify the same, a survey, by Fashions magazine, revealed that 50% of the recent female models were suffering from malnutrition in the pursuit of having
zero-figure
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a zero - figure
. Media’s extra coverage on the excessive dieting of
winners
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the winners
of
last
year’s beauty contest is found as a prime reason behind the same. In conclusion, while people vary in their opinions, I strongly condemn the view that
media
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the media
should be allowed to enjoy authority to share details
on
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about
anyone’s private life because not only it is immoral, but
also
occasionally leads to misinformation leading to adverse effects on common people’s life.
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