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Many office authorities impose a restriction on smoking within the office premises. Some governments have even banned smoking in all public places. This is a good idea but it takes away some of our freedom. What is your opinion?

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Use of tobacco products has become popular after the industrial revolution. Cigarettes are so cheaply available that people do not bother to think about it before lighting
one
 in every minute. Society is engaged in very long debate, whether smoking should be banned completely in public places or not. Some argue that it would
encroachment
Suggestion
encroach
 to
one
's
freedom
, while others support
this
 idea. I think smokers should be allowed to
smoke
 only in designated areas away from the public. According to world health organisation, smoking is
biggest cause
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the biggest cause
 of oral and lung cancer. Even
second
-hand smokers, people who inhale
smoke
 releases by smokers, are equally prone to the disease.
Therefore
, looking at
this
 risk, smokers and non-smokers should be segregated. In countries like the United States of America, designated smoking areas are built and smoking in public places is banned and fines are imposed if anyone is found using cigarettes in public place. While it may be easy to argue that banning smoking is intruding to
one
's
freedom
. But forcing
one
's
smoke
 to other non-smokers
is
Suggestion
are
 even a bigger crime. Advocates, who fight for the ban
of
Suggestion
on
 smoking, ask that why should an innocent bystander suffer from the
smoke
 released by smokers?
Therefore
, it can easily be concluded that banning smoking is
public place
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a public place
 is not attached to
freedom
; it is rather imposing the right of
freedom
. With above points, in conclusion, it can be concluded that with alternative options for smoking location made available, smoking can be banned at all public
location
Suggestion
locations
 without creating any controversy.
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