The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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amount
of Change the quantifier
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sales
in Use synonyms
million
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euros
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries in two years, 1999 and 2004.
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Overall
, the first and Linking Words
second
place Linking Words
of
usage of both coffee and bananas is for Change preposition
in
UK
and Use synonyms
Switzerland
in 1999 and 2004 Use synonyms
while
Sweden almost has the least consumption of both in those years.
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million
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euros
of Fairtrade-labelled of coffee in 1999 which was two times more Use synonyms
that
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than
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UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
but
in 2004 Correct word choice
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UK
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sales
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is
slightly 3 times more Change the verb form
are
that
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than
Switzerland
. The Use synonyms
sales
of Denmark and Sweden Use synonyms
remains
steady and Change the verb form
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it
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only
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million
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of
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euros
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sales
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of sales
increasing
recorded for Denmark, from 1 to 1.7 MM Wrong verb form
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euros
.
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amount
of Change the quantifier
number
sales
for bananas was 15 Use synonyms
million
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of
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euros
for Use synonyms
Switzerland
in 1999 which increases to 47 Use synonyms
million
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of
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euros
. Use synonyms
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, the most rate of growth belonged to Linking Words
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UK
which is 5.5 multiplying, from 1 to 5.5 MM Correct article usage
the UK
euros
. The only country Use synonyms
decreased
, is Denmark with Correct pronoun usage
that decreased
the
approximately becoming half from 2 to 0.9 Correct article usage
apply
million
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euros
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