The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries in two years, 1999 and 2004.
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place
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usage of both coffee and bananas is for
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and
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in 1999 and 2004
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Sweden almost has the least consumption of both in those years.
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3
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of Fairtrade-labelled of coffee in 1999 which was two times more
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UK
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the UK
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in 2004
UK
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sales
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slightly 3 times more
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Switzerland
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. The
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of Denmark and Sweden
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0.2
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but 70%
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recorded for Denmark, from 1 to 1.7 MM
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. The
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of
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for bananas was 15
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euros
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for
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in 1999 which increases to 47
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, the most rate of growth belonged to
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which is 5.5 multiplying, from 1 to 5.5 MM
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. The only country
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, is Denmark with
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approximately becoming half from 2 to 0.9
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million, euros, uk, switzerland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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