The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
sales
in million
euros
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries in two years, 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, the first and second
place of
usage of both coffee and bananas is for Change preposition
in
UK
and Switzerland
in 1999 and 2004 while
Sweden almost has the least consumption of both in those years.
Although
Switzerland
sales
3 Replace the word
sold
million
euros
of Fairtrade-labelled of coffee in 1999 which was two times more that
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than
UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
but
in 2004 Correct word choice
apply
UK
sales
is
slightly 3 times more Change the verb form
are
that
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than
Switzerland
. The sales
of Denmark and Sweden remains
steady and Change the verb form
remain
it
changes Correct pronoun usage
apply
only
0.2 Change preposition
by only
million
of
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apply
euros
but 70% sales
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of sales
increasing
recorded for Denmark, from 1 to 1.7 MM Wrong verb form
increase
euros
.
The amount
of Change the quantifier
number
sales
for bananas was 15 million
of
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apply
euros
for Switzerland
in 1999 which increases to 47 million
of
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apply
euros
. However
, the most rate of growth belonged to UK
which is 5.5 multiplying, from 1 to 5.5 MM Correct article usage
the UK
euros
. The only country decreased
, is Denmark with Correct pronoun usage
that decreased
the
approximately becoming half from 2 to 0.9 Correct article usage
apply
million
euros
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