Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern economy

require

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requires

many people to work for many hours. As a consequence, children spend less

time

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with their parents, a fact that, by some people, lead to depression and

anxiaty

(psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic

anxiety

among children.

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, to some extent, spending less

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with our children may have

negative affect

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a negative effect

negative effect

on their education, I do not fully agree with the above statement. The presence of parents in a

child

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's life is invaluable, and have

major affect

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a major effect

major effect

major effects

on his mental maturity. When a

child

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is in the presence of his loving parents, he

grow

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grows

up in a warm and welcoming

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, which accept him even when he makes mistakes or react

improparly

in an improper way

improperly

. Through the use of positive feedback,

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as saying a good and loving word, or through physical contact like

kissess

touch with the lips or press the lips (against someone's mouth or other body part) as an expression of love, greeting, etc.

kisses

and hugs, the

child

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learn how to respond properly, and increase his confidence.

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, when a

child

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is not exposed to

this

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environment

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, due to lack of parental support, he looses the ability to learn through positive feedback, and as a consequence, become anxious and afraid. Despite the above mentioned, I do not think that modern lifestyle leads to substantial suffering among children. The main reason for that, in my opinion, is because if parents spend their remaining free

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focoused

being in focus or brought into focus

focused

on their children, rather than other things, like television or reading the news, they will be

abe

(usually followed by 'to') having the necessary means or skill or know-how or authority to do something

able

to compensate the lost

time

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.

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, if a parent

take

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takes

his son playing basketball in the afternoon, and talk to him for an hour about

he's

male possessive pronoun

his

daily activities and interactions, the

child

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will receive the positive

environment

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he needed, even though

he's

male possessive pronoun

his

father worked until six in the afternoon. To conclude, changing times require parents to work for longer hours, a fact that

have

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has

an

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on the

child

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's

environment

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. Despite that, I do not feel it leads to increased suffering among children. If parent's will spend their remaining

time

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focoused

being in focus or brought into focus

focused

on their

child

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, he will receive the safe

environment

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to grow into the man he should be.