People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
It has been seen that with the development of technology and wide globalization people are working longer than usual working hours.
This
leads towards to less amount of sleep.Eventually,
it has both positive effects like getting more money Accept space
,
fulfiling
their enjoyment and negative effects like deteriorating put in effect
fulfilling
time
spending in social as well as with family. This
will definitely affect society worst.
To begin
with, there are numerous reasons why people are getting less time
for sleep than before. First
and foremost reason is all time
working nature. In present time
if you want to have a good quality life you have to work
two or sometimes more than jobs. Obviously, if you work
this
many hours eventually you'll get so tired. The Second
reason, most ofter
these jobs are not near to living place. Therefor, travelling took a significant amount of happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
after
often
time
. For an instance, for some people travelling take almost 4-5 hours for both ways to workplace
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the workplace
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because of the internet. Most of the young arousing or holding the attention
interesting
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generation
there
of them or themselves
their
time
to watch movies,
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songs or chatting with friends over the internet with the help of computers or hear with intention
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smartphones
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phenomenon has it's
own merits and demerits. To start with, not enough sleep can directly affect to of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
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the person's health
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attentation
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attention
work
or any other activities. This
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Moreover, because
this
scenario people are spending less time
with loved ones and living in the stress and anxicity
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a positive effect
positive effects
billionairs
cut their sleep hours to a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars
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billionaires'
billionaire's
work
more achieve decent goal
. But sadly, not everyone is following that.
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and long working hours people cutting encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
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people
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