Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

With the modernization of the era, the problem of

environment

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environmental

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pollution

is increasingly erupting

that

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and

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people believe

government

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the government

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should take their center of attention on diminishing housing problems and environmental

pollution

. These ministries are forceful but authorities should have more general solutions

includes

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including

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the main causes of

other disease

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another disease

other diseases

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such

as diet and

laid-pack

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laid-back

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lifestyle. To commence with, curtailing

pollution

can prevent illness

that

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through

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government’s

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the government’s

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effort

in

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to

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cut down abuse in communication

such

as

introduce

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introducing

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green spaces and

enhance

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enhancing

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people in

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using electric vehicles.

In other words

,

this

clarification helps restrict greenhouse gases like CO2 or NO2

emission

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emissions

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.

This

target should be provided to scale down respiratory diseases, tuberculosis, and respiratory tract inflammation.

Moreover

,

policy makers

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policymakers

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should regulate the treatment and disposal of waste, considering these issues as major causes of digestive problems and

water –borne

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water–borne

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infection.

For instance

, in

this

day and age, citizens use the system of fin water and sediment to improve

quality

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the quality

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of water. Perhaps, the government should

also

concentrate on intimidations with

human’s

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human

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health

such

as

absorb

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absorbing

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delicate food and lack of

doing

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apply

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exercises

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exercise

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. These issues make

immune

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the immune

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system of

human

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humans

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become more

anemic

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anaemic

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,

this

is the cause that

make

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them easier to suffer from other diseases. The state should take these causes into account and take appropriate remedial measures.

For example

, they could impose higher taxes on fast food items

while

promoting healthier options, or encourage people to cycle or walk more by building bike lanes and clear sidewalks of roadside businesses.

To conclude

,

this

essay discussed why it is necessary for

the

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apply

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lawmaker

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lawmakers

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to encourage reducing environmental issues in order to prevent

humans'

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human'

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beings from

the

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illness

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illnesses

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. I absolutely agree with the statement that it is the responsibility of the government to focus on environmental

pollution

.