Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, charter-flight has brought significant changes to our lives.

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, whether the cheap

aircrafts

a vehicle that can fly

aircraft

should be prohibited due to its

negatively

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negative

impact is

controversial issue

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a controversial issue

. I am of the opinion that banning low-cost airline would do more harm than good. There are significant drawbacks associated with

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preventing

low-price aircrafts.

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of all, it is clear that

this

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action would lead to many people will be unemployed.

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means that cheap aircrafts

provides

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provide

jobs for thousands of citizens and without them mass unemployment would be alternative.

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, most of these flights are to tourism destinations, so the economics of tourist hotspots would be severely damaged.

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, the income of restaurants and equipment hire business in

this

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location would be greatly reduced and causing the destruction of

entire economy

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the entire economy

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, the local authorities should give a priority to improve quality of charter-flight rather than

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prohibiting

it.

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is not to say that curbing low-cost airlines would not bring advantage to society. There

are of

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are, of

course, with the resulting reduction in flight, less airports would need to be constructed.

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may be a good outcome because airports are costly for government seeing that expensive infrastructure

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as roads and rail lines are required to reach them.

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, Aircrafts

run

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runs

on fossil fuels that discharge pollutants into the environment, so if a government do not enact law to ban cheap air flights, it would increase

greenhouse effect

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the greenhouse effect

and lead to

contamination environmental

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environmental contamination

. But still, the cons are far greater. In conclusion, making

effort

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an effort

the effort

to prohibit charter-flight will have an influence on the economic development of

country

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the country

a country

countries

. Meanwhile, local authorities must shoulder their responsibilities to protect

environment

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the environment

. Only by doing so we can assure that we could hand

this

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beautiful planet to our

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generation and the

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generation after.

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