Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, charter-flight has brought significant changes to our lives.
However
, whether the cheap
aircrafts
a vehicle that can fly
aircraft
should be prohibited due to its
negatively
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negative
impact is
controversial issue
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a controversial issue
. I am of the opinion that banning low-cost airline would do more harm than good. There are significant drawbacks associated with
prevented
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preventing
low-price aircrafts.
First
of all, it is clear that
this
action would lead to many people will be unemployed.
This
means that cheap aircrafts
provides
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provide
jobs for thousands of citizens and without them mass unemployment would be alternative.
Moreover
, most of these flights are to tourism destinations, so the economics of tourist hotspots would be severely damaged.
For example
, the income of restaurants and equipment hire business in
this
location would be greatly reduced and causing the destruction of
entire economy
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the entire economy
.
Therefore
, the local authorities should give a priority to improve quality of charter-flight rather than
prohibited
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prohibiting
it.
This
is not to say that curbing low-cost airlines would not bring advantage to society. There
are of
Accept comma addition
are, of
course, with the resulting reduction in flight, less airports would need to be constructed.
This
may be a good outcome because airports are costly for government seeing that expensive infrastructure
such
as roads and rail lines are required to reach them.
In addition
, Aircrafts
run
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runs
on fossil fuels that discharge pollutants into the environment, so if a government do not enact law to ban cheap air flights, it would increase
greenhouse effect
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the greenhouse effect
and lead to
contamination environmental
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environmental contamination
. But still, the cons are far greater. In conclusion, making
effort
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an effort
the effort
to prohibit charter-flight will have an influence on the economic development of
country
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the country
a country
countries
. Meanwhile, local authorities must shoulder their responsibilities to protect
environment
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the environment
. Only by doing so we can assure that we could hand
this
beautiful planet to our
next
generation and the
next
generation after.

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