Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is has been argued
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is argued
argues
that that the people can not
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
positively
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positive
on their
habitat
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, but
also
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either administrator or big enterprises alone can perform it. I disagree that administrators and firm alone can
effect
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improvement to the
territory
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because the people are closer to their home as well as have the
time
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to execute a project that can boost the surroundings. To start with, the administrators and big organisation can not achieve the betterment of the
territory
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due to the fact that they are far from the surroundings.
This
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is because the people have the direct contact to the
habitat
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, which can better their home. Take
for instance
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, my community leaders tend to construct a new
street roads
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street, road
street road
, they contacted public officials and large organisations, but they turn a deft hear to the
complains
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complaint
complainant
, which lead the people to upgrade the road by themselves.
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, the surroundings can only be upgraded by the people. Another point to consider is that both the public officers and the large enterprise
does not have
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do not have
the
time
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to
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
positively on the
territory
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. In fact, they are busy to concentrate on it, but the people alone have the
time
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to boost it. Take
for example
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, the
time
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spent on gathering documents funds
can not
can not
cannot
be over emphasised but citizen have
lot
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a lot
lots
of
time
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to upgrade
territory
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when they are ready to
effect
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it.
As a result
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of
this
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, projects are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
delayed. In conclusion, people
can not
can not
cannot
achieve the improvement of their home,
however
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public officers and reputable organizations alone can boost the
habitat
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. I disagree with
this
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statement because only the citizens are close and have the
time
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to resolve and better their
habitat
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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