Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that over the
last
century have had lots of changes in our world, lots of those associated with the discoveries of the science and technology. Nowadays, there are many people who think that we have a lot of opportunities when we compare in the past. I tend to agree with
this
statement, and in
this
essay, I will support my view with some examples.
Firstly
, I want to support my idea with the invention of a new technology of location and communication.
In other words
, now we have the disposition of new devices,
for example
the smart phones, whose function could help us to communicate with people from another part of the world, when before
this
was not possible.
Furthermore
, we can have access to use a map that provide us the information on location and can explain us who to arrive in a certain direction.
However
, all these inventions are changing the values of the people. The reason for
this
is that with the use of these smartphones the people tend to be more distracted. To illustrate that, I would like to talk about the advertisements who tried to motivate the people to use less their phone and enjoy the little things that the life can give us.
Moreover
, these days we have the possibility to choose what we want study and the kind of work associated with our studies. When before, a long time ago, it was totally different and was available whom had a certain amount of money.
For example
, while the men had to go to work in the factory, the women stayed at home to clean and take care of the family. Whereas, now we have the choice to choose and not always, we take advantage of that. To sum up, over the years, we had the opportunity to improve our quality of life thanks to the new technologies and all the changes that the human being could experiment and for all these reasons, I tend to agree with the statement.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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