You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singer's was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter. Say how you feel about his performance. Give details of your musical activities. Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear
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David Adeleke, I am writing to express my certification to you about your stage act, which you
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two weeks ago at a show in lekki. I was exhilarated about your stage presentation, I feel excited listening to your music. You are a great songster of our time. More so, you are a humble young musician with a large heart. Let me explain the information about my musical task.
Firstly
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am a great writer that derived likeness in writing songs.
Secondly
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have written over two hundred songs in the
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five years, and I have just written a piece of songs, which I would like to perform on when I have the opportunity. I would like you to aid my musical career. I would appreciate
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you can introduce me to a record music label that can improve my vocal task.
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like you to finance my stage play. I look forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Temitope Ajibare.
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