Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Schools and

insitutes

set up or lay the groundwork for

institutes

are that type of place where all

type

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types

student

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studies

can

study

together, whether

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they are intelligent or weak in

study

. Some people proclaim that, students should be

choosed

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chosen

chose

choose

according to their academic abilities by schools, while, at the same time, other say that

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schools should select all students with different abilities studying each other. On the one hand

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students who have better academic

ability

than other students

that is

beneficial for others because, that scholars could be helped to each other

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which is crucial for

weak

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weak students

the weak student

student

However

, by doing group

study

the level of

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the process of using your mind to consider something carefully

thinking

and capacity are

upsurged

a sudden forceful flow

upsurge

because, it

boost

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boosts

the IQ level.

Moreover

student

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the student

learn

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learns

things quickly by each other and learn many more new things as well as

student

grap

any number of entities (members) considered as a unit

groups

new different thinking quickly from other scholars which will be helped students in the future to tackle with situations.

On the other hand

, if schools select

student

by their academic

ability

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ability, then

then

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student

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the student

students

a student

will not be able to deal with different

ability

, which is vital for upcoming life. Though, if students

study

with different abilities and

thingking

the process of using your mind to consider something carefully

thinking

, so they will be

abled

(usually followed by 'to') having the necessary means or skill or know-how or authority to do something

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to survive in any situation of life. To put it in a nutshell, after considering both view points. I believe that,

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the school

schools

should choose all students with different academic

ability

because it is better for all students as well as for society.

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