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Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

#pleasure #imagination #language #skills #tv
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It is a fact that reading a
book
 during leisure time would enhance creativity and linguistic skills rather than watching
television
.
This
 is an essential habit to have immense benefits, especially among the young generation. In
this
 essay, I shall discuss why I strongly believe that reading is far better than anyone else.
One
 of the prominent reasons why reading is the best thing than watching a program is to enlarge our imagination or creativity, which makes life become better.
In other words
, if
one
 refers to a magazine he can imagine the actual content in his mind, unlike the
television
 displays the image to the viewers. Since there is no active role of the brain, the capability of a person would be questionable if he prefers to watch programs as referring to a textbook.
For instance
, a survey conducted between two groups of students,
one
 was to read a storybook and the other was to watch a movie. The
first
 group reported that they were able to recollect many words when attributed to the other group.
This
 clearly shows that reading absolutely helps the person to have a vivid image than observing shows. Apparently, reading a
book
 makes a man wise and knowledgeable, which boosts the language ability and in turns communication be easier. In a similar way,
one
 can learn a new language by acquiring more words belong to a particular language,
this
 can be possible predominantly going through the
book
. To cite an example,
one
 of my little cousins could easily learn his mother tongue by hearing story tales at night. To sum up,
although
television
 provides both audiovisual impacts on the audience, I completely agree that reading a
book
 is worth doing than watching
television
 due to increase our imagination and linguistic skills too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • language skills
  • active engagement
  • creativity
  • vocabulary
  • language usage
  • passive
  • simplified
  • dialogue
  • depth
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