Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think is it the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

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Acquisition of knowledge is only
purpose pupils
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purpose, pupils
head for schools.
However
, by the groundbreaking attitude, some students break silence in classrooms and disturb their teachers and does not allow them to teach anything and other pupils suffers. In order to maintain
adequate attitude
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an adequate attitude
in classes, some school of business
suggest
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suggests
educators to send
such
students out of their respective classes. I believe that asking students to leave the classrooms is
bigger
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the biggest
the big
biggest
mistake and there are other methods which should be used. Admittedly, maturity comes with the age and experience. At
such
a tender age, children do not know
importance
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the importance
of education,
however
, teachers completely understand the value of education and making pupils to leave classrooms will decrease their grades and eventually,
nation
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the nation
will suffer.
Furthermore
,
such
attitude from teachers can promote the behaviour of the students as they easily get a break from classes and they may get repetitive with interruptions. According to various surveys it is found that, students interrupt classes only in groups. In order to maintain the atmosphere in classes, educators can break
such
groups and
this
will be very effective to maintain silence.
Afterthat
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After that
, teachers can make disruptive students to stand at
last
the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree
least
of
classroom
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the classroom
classrooms
so that education loss can not occur.
Eventheless
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Eventually
,
school
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the school
schools
can arrange moral classes for
such
students and they can convey the same to their guardians so that they can ask their kids to behave properly in the classes. Having dwelled on
such
thoughts it is clear that asking students to leave classes is a temporary solution, while giving moral classes is
permanent solution
Suggestion
a permanent solution
and should be adopted.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disruptive
  • behavior
  • classroom
  • solution
  • approach
  • implement
  • positive reinforcement
  • rewards
  • additional support
  • resources
  • counseling
  • therapy
  • involving
  • parents
  • guardians
  • supportive
  • inclusive
  • classroom environment
  • managing
  • effective
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