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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is widely suggested that libraries for the public are no more essential in
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 present era, while other people do not support
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 view.
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 people can now obtain a wide range of
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 from the
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, I believe that public libraries are still important because they are the only source of some
information
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. On the one hand, there are numerous
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 available on the
internet
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. Many people now use electronic copies of books and do research mainly using their
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 enabled devices
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 as phones and computers and
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 trend is on the rise.
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, in recent years, many undergraduates in Nigeria who are conducting research depend mainly on the
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.
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, some people believe that since few people use public libraries now, they are no longer relevant.
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, public libraries house many publications
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 which are yet to have electronic copies. Many library catalogues comprise textbooks, periodicals, research journals, audio and video cassettes as well as newspapers that have been used before the advent on the
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.
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, they are the only providers of certain
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. For examples, detailed
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 about the colonial era in Nigeria are provided by the Nigerian National Library.
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, the
internet
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 could reveal some of
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information
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,
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, they are often inadequate and inaccurate.
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, public libraries are still important today and agree with
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 view. In conclusion, the
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 is the source of many
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 today,
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, some people think that public libraries are not important again. I disagree with the view, owing to the fact that public libraries are the custodian of many
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 that are not yet on the net. Efforts geared towards harnessing
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 benefit should be promoted.
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