some people think that space exploration is waste of resources while others thinks that it is essential for mankind to explore the universe in which we live discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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is a vast thing to explore and till now all the data humans have is equivalent to a drop of water in an ocean.Suggestion
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some
people have a mindset that Suggestion
Some
space
exploration is wastage of resources while others take it as Use synonyms
future investment
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a future investment
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scientists and even ordinary people have curiosity to know about the universe because they know that Accept space
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laws and phenomenon that keep going every Accept space
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which can change our lives by unfolding truths of natureLinking Words
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in the Accept space
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a periodic table
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they can bring huge advancements in our existing technologies Accept space
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that is
why scientists keep doing research on Linking Words
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recently scientists discovered a celestial body revolving in a particular Accept space
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the world
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the incentive to explore the Suggestion
has taken
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sun, therefore
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they have launched a spacecraft in the year 2018 named as 'Solar Probe'and it will swoop to within 4 million miles of the Sun's surfaceAccept space
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also
helps humans to develop technology.
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some people think that Accept space
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opposite way
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opposite ways
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an opposite way
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They believe that humans are just wasting their natural resourcesAccept space
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time and money in non-productive areas of life.The reason behind their view is deterioration in fossil fuels becauseAccept space
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if a Accept space
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space
project is initiatedUse synonyms
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it requires tons of fuel to attain that acceleration to reach in no gravity zoneAccept space
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they look for materialistic achievements attained by Accept space
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project have several drawbacksUse synonyms
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but there achievements outweigh the drawbacks.Accept space
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