These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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There was a time when we used to say "Teaching is the best profession" but the latest trends across many countries show that very few people are showing interest in the field of teaching, especially in secondary school. In
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essay, I would like to discuss the possible reasons for
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trend. The curriculum over the
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few decades had changed drastically. The subjects to be taught used to be same more or less every year, but
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has changed recently. In modern schools, primary and post primary syllabus had undergone a tectonic shift. It is more curated to serve
pupil's interest
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the pupil's interest
in a particular subject rather than a "one solution for all" approach. Due to
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, there is
lack
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a lack
of expertise in a particular field. Teachers are forced to update themselves constantly to support
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ever-changing syllabi, which some would have found it difficult to do.
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, norms now a days are more stringent in any profession. Job seekers are forced to take additional trainings or certifications for compliance, which will delay the process of their induction.
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is forcing them to take up other professions. In a way these norms are for
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the benefit
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not many teachers to be, feel they are
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problem might be solved by giving appropriate training, provide proper
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available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
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for their research, so that tutors can update themselves and teach. Coming to the
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problem, the governments should increase awareness on why there are
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rules and clearly explain the benefits of these additional trainings.
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