Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

Environment is the most concerned problem in our world
nowsaday
and the importance of protection our living
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
rises dramatically.
Although
,
government
and large companies are capable of making a huge difference, each person can join
hand
Suggestion
hands
together to improve the
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
.
Government
plays an important role in protecting and improving our living
enviroments
the totality of surrounding conditions
environments
, it should be at the leader role because the
government
is the only one who has the rights to encourage, fine,
Accept space
the citizens.
In addition
,
although
large companies do not have many rights like the
government
the impact of them on the
enviroments
the totality of surrounding conditions
environments
is a big deal.
Therefore
, both
government
and big companies are the special candidates who have the legal rights to protect our
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
This
does not mean that individuals can not help at all. The
government
can only succeed when each
citizens
Suggestion
citizen
has
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
and
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
about
enviroment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
. Each person can do a little thing together, gradually, it becomes a big effect. All in all,
goverment
Suggestion
the government
government
and big companies are
capabale
(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability
capable
of making a great deal of changing the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
However
, a normal person still
play
Suggestion
plays
an important role in protecting and improving our
live
Suggestion
lives
liver
.

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