Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss Advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Computers have become important part of our day to day activity,
similary
in like or similar manner
similarly
similar
it is greatly used in
education sector
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the education sector
as well.
although
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Although
there have been
improvement
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improved
due to its
use
, but there is strong belief that it might not
helping
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help
student as expected. In
this
essay we will discuss opinion on both. There has been noticeable
improvment
a change for the better; progress in development
improvement
in the field of
education
due to the
use
of computers.
This
is due to the fact, that the information
are
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is
available from outside the
books
a (usually rectangular) container; may have a lid
box
as well, and
also
student
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the student
can study as per their comfortable time and place.
For
example people
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example, people
can now attend classes from different part of the country through computers.
Hence
, for
this
reason among
others using
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others, using
computer
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the computer
a computer
computers
has proven value add in
education
. With
increase
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an increase
the increase
in the
use
of computers, challenges to deal with the cons has
also
increased. If the computer
are not used
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is not used
under supervision students
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under supervision, students
can be using it not the way its intended to. There has been cases where students have used computers just to copy assignments rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
understanding the task given by
teacher
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the teacher
. Because of which students will get an 'A' in assignment without knowing a word about it. Development in technology is done to help the human kind
,
Accept space
,
and
same
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the same
is expected from computers for
education
. In my opinion, it is
upto
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up to
us that we
use
it to our
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
or loss, computers can help us if used
idealy
in an ideal manner
ideally
, else can negatively affect the
education
system if used without rules and regulations.
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