Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Infrastructure and internal strength and well being
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forms the actual economy of a country.
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, various people believe that external infrastructure and designer buildings are important for a
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to look good while others think internal factors like better education and better medical services are important. As per my opinion, I am strongly in favour of
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the above points and I will discuss
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these factors in detail with examples. Talking about schools and hospitals
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for sure these facilities
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these are not only facilities, but a basic necessity for a
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to grow and its citizens to live happy and progressive life. Having educated citizens will help the
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to grow in the long run and helps in reducing social evils like crime, rape, murder, burglary and in fact become a part of its growing economy.
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, in a country like India, the government is spending lots of money in educating the youth especially girls.Schemes like a midday meal to attract students. Hospitals with other hand, is the need rather than a luxury for people, especially for general people who cannot afford to go out of their town or
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for treatments, that should be available within the
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and government should invest in upgrading and opening new hospitals. Not only providing new hospitals, but
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making the service cheap is the duty of any government. Now, talking about beautifying and creating a good outer structure of big buildings of the
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is as important as its internal factors. Good infrastructure attracts investment and tourism and
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the business and economy of the
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better. At
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, according to my viewpoint
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impressive buildings and internal schools and hospitals,
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are important for a
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to develop better and make its citizens happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Architectural grandeur
  • Iconic edifices
  • Economic catalyst
  • Cultural landmark
  • Urban fabric
  • Sustainable development
  • Public services
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Community well-being
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Urban planning
  • Holistic approach
  • Government stewardship
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