In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In the
last
ten years, news broadcasts on television
are loosing rating. This
trend, unfortunately, is happening also
among the written journalism, and many news paper
are closing down. The main reason for that, is that young people do not follow traditional media it as they did previously. There are several reasons why these changes are happening, and many journalists are trying to find solutions in order to change it.
The main reason, probably, why young people are not watching the news on Suggestion
news papers
newspaper
television
, or reading it on
the newspaper, is based on the fact that with the introduction of smart phones and online data, people are receiving their news from another source. There are many websites, Suggestion
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such
as Instagram, Facebook and Youtube
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YouTube, for
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for example
, which provide fast and accurate news online. As a result
, traditional news became irrelevant, and so people are not watching it any more.
Another reason, why people are watching the new less and less, reside in the fact, that most of the journalists on television
are relatively old and formal, which appeals less to the young
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the younger
croud
. Even though young people are interested in the news, they want it presented in a non-formal way, using everyday words and phrases. As an example, one of the most watched a large number of things or people considered together
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Youtube
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YouTube
journalists
who sits with his daily clothes, and interview politicians in his house in Tel Aviv.
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journalist
can changed
, and become relevant again. In order for Suggestion
can change
this
to happen, the media must addapt
to the young and fast environment. make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
adapted
For example
, news papers
should invest substantially more on their online version, rather than the printed news. a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
Also
, television
news must become less formal, and incorporate young journalists and articles directed to the young
population, so that people can relate. Suggestion
the younger
Last
, presented articles should be changed focused more on in depth reviews, which can not
be produced through online can not
cannot
websited
.
In conclusion, new media have affected the amount of people who consume traditional news. a computer connected to the internet that maintains a series of web pages on the World Wide Web
websites
This
is mostly due to the fact, that young people are gathering information from other sources online. In order to change the tide, news broadcasts must adapt and become less formal and more attractive to the young croud
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