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Money Can Make Life Easier And More Comfortable. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#money #life
In the present world,
money
 makes a prominent role
on
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in
 part of the human
life
. Few people believed that all the rich people are enjoying their
life
 with
an
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a
 great
luxery
something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity
luxury
 and
lavish
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lavishness
. But, in my opinion, I strongly disagree that there are so many things to be necessary in part of
life
 to make a happy. In
this
 essay, I will illustrate with probable reasons to elaborate
further
.
Firstly
, peace of mind is much needed for us on both at personal and professional
life
. Even if we had
a
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an
 amount of currency, it
wont
will not
won't
 help us to avoid the personal tensions and worries.
Secondly
, being a healthy is
also
 plays
a
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an
 important in our daily cycle.
Finally
, we have to maintain good relationship with family and friends. When we face any problem, there is no matter if we have enough
money
 without having great well wishers to support us.
However
, in a modern era,
money
 is
inter linked
be interwoven or interconnected
interlinked
 on every human’s need. It gives us all
luxery
something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity
luxury
 and comfort
life
.
To
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Too
Two
 grown up as a
walthy
having an abundant supply of money or possessions of value
wealthy
worthy
healthy
 and
prospurus
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
life
, it is mandatory.
Moreover
, it makes to a respect
on
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for
 that person in a society.
In addition
, the people who are rich will have
power
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the power
 to rule the world. In conclusion, I would like to say that there is no limit to earn the
money
. But, people are so
passionated
having or expressing strong emotions
passionate
 to increase their revenue in terms of assets. Ultimately, it gives a happy at some extent to buy a basic needs. After that, healthy and
prosperus
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
life
 with a beautiful family is matters.

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