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People should follow the custom and tradition when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #custom #tradition #country
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The lot
Lot
Lit
Lite
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 is irrefutable that, more and more people migrate from one
country
 to another.
Therefore
, a certain segment of the society
believe
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believes
 that
masses
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the masses
 should adopt the custom and traditions of that particular
country
 where they want to live. I endorse the statement to a large extent. I have some solid grounds to defend my
opinion which
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opinion, which
 I would like to explicate it at length in the paragraphs to come.
To begin
 with, individuals should learn all the rituals because if they
not follow
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don't follow
aren't following
then
 they may face various problems.
Firstly
, it is difficulties for new residents who do not understand the rules and regulations of
host
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the host country
country
.
For example
, when people want to start their own business they have to know
local business custom
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the local business custom
 in order to be successful.
Secondly
, some actions will be illegal in the host
country
 and will make local people angry.
For instance
, some countries well famous countries for the clean, if new individuals throw the trash on the
street they
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street, they
 will be punished and have to pay the fees. So it is the
beneficial
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most beneficial
benefit
 for new residents to know about each and everything about that particular
country
.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of benefits of following local customs and traditions.
First
 of all, it is easy to make friends when new comers understand local customs and traditions.
Moreover
, new immigrants will enjoy the traditions and able to take part in community life.
For example
, they can participate in festivals with new friends when they have mutual understanding. Apart from it, they never have to
paid
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pay
 their hard earned money as a punishment if they have knowledge about rules and regulations. To conclude, to make their life easier masses should study the customs and traditions before migration
,
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,
so that they never face any trouble in their life in the host
country
. I agree with you.Yes, I agree.I don't agree.
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