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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

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I think, there is
vast difference
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a vast difference
 to observe any
art
 or part of
meuseum
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
museums
 in real life rather than in internet. I don'
t
 think we can feel the real meaning of
art
 through the net. Though we can know what is there that doesn'
t
 mean we can be
satisfy
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satisfied
, if it is
so
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so, then
then
 we can easily travel the whole world through advance technology. In my opinion, only seeing
to
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in
 the historical pictures doesn'
t
 assure us. It doesn'
t
 provide us
art but
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art, but
also
 tell about the sacrifices given by our ancestors. Everyone is not so lucky that they can use the advanced technology in their life. Even for important purpose they are unable to utilize it properly.
Hence
, for these types of people there is more value of museum and
art
 galleries. Many students used to travel for miles away just to get knowledge of
such
 arts. In
conclude
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concluding
,
internet
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the internet
 can be
assess
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assessed
 to every corner of the world. Many people prefer to visit rather than look
in
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at
into
internet
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the internet
.
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  • virtual
  • digital
  • online
  • accessibility
  • inclusivity
  • cultural heritage
  • physical experience
  • immersion
  • local tourism
  • economy
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