Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

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equality has always been the main concern of the world for ages. Now days most of the people are getting modern in their approach towards

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evil of society and learning to respect both the

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, few people are their living in many backward parts of the world who believe just the opposite, they consider one

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superior to another. Talking about the jobs relevant for one particular

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is made for the benefit of society. I am in favour of

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equality, but I

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believe there are certain jobs which are not meant for women and will explain the same in

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. Certain risk related jobs like working in a coal mine or a factory having hazardous processes and other

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jobs are risking and dangerous for women to do and

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the ones which involves physical strength.

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, there are many other jobs which earlier are not done by women

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but now with the change in technology and thinking women are doing and excelling

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, himanagement jobs

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, along with that there are many jobs which are not supposed to be done by men and women are good at them like

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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198 words

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but put are in nurse homes or care homes. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

some people think increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to solve global problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree