All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

The number of overweight people is indeed growing all over the world. Statistics has it that 25.7% of the world population
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overweight. The reasons for
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trend cannot be overemphasized. Obesity can be attributed to the following reasons and more:- Nutrition, inactivity, lack of exercise, food type, heredity, technology etc. Over the years, people have changed their diets from what we used to have in the past. More people now eat high calorie diets, food that
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devoid of vitamins, fibre and fruits but mainly fat. Most people now take a lot of in-between meals and they do not engage in regular exercise. Exercise is an important factor in the weight loss routine. To keep fit and stay healthy, people need to be more engaged in physical activity. Walking, running, aerobics and the use of treadmill should be common practice to stay fit and healthy. More cases of obese people and young people with weight related
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diseases, including
heart disease has increased tremendously in recent years going by statistics.

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