Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, yet many would, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner-city areas? Do you agree or disagree?

Nurturing animals in

house

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the house

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are

one of the civilian’s pleasure in their hectic life, which became their psychological therapy of their work issues when getting

home

. The

piority

an organization to gain political power

party

priority

parity

suppose that living

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home

is better for their health and their

safty

the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions

safety

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the contradictory way, most people said that these

speices

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

spices

speeches

envolved

connected by participation or association or use

involved

suitable for the wild environment, so they deserve to be outside. In my point of view, I agree both of view. Thousands

year

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years

ago, all of

speices

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

living in a same habitat,

in other

words we

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words, we

are equally so I suppose that living together under the roof is absolutely normal.

This

is a win-win relationship, people need a friend to

detachment

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detach

the loneliness and they work and supply their pet food so they must get the responsibility for their pet. According to the instincts of dogs, they always wander around so their owner suppose that their

dog

will be

safty

yielding readily to pressure or weight

soft

when they around

home

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the home

, in their visible vision.

In addition

, the urban area with a limited housing space, their

dog

can be disoriented and bother their neighbourhood, more serious it bites other people. Because of these reasons I think indoor playground is enough for them, not only protect their

safty

the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions

safety

but

also

the other people one.

On the other hand

, others think the owner should

taken

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take

their

dog

out for a walk once or twice a week. It is undeniable that, sunlight is extremely decisive for almost growth and no exceptions with their

dog

so walking outside in the early morning will make them in a state of euphoria. In

conlusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

although

I acknowledge both points of view, I do not think dogs should be held inside a

home

against their will. I believe they are amazing being to help us tackle loneliness, but should not be a slave to serve our whims.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, yet many would, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner-city areas? Do you agree or disagree?

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