Some people think certain prisoner should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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not all offences are worth

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and imprisonment, many suggest some alternate penalty for lawbreaking in

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of social work or free service for the community. I partially agree that

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committing minor crimes should be left to contribute in social unpaid activities while, stern criminals should be

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in a stricter manner.

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about how an alternative

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can be helpful to the society, whereas it might not be suitable for all criminals.

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, Many offences are not severe and it is uncivilized to them behind the bars. In my opinion, criminals found with minor

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activity with ignorance or committing the crime unintentionally, who realize and repent for their act should be alternatively punished. Most of

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crimes are believed to be non-repetitive and accidental which can be punished in a different way by contributing the development and betterment of society.

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lawbreakers can do handloom work, waste management, plantation with the collaboration of NGOs to make the nation better.

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, the criminals who indulge in

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unforgivable crimes

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as murder, rape, serial killing, terrorism and hijacking must not be overlooked by jurisdiction. Most of these crimes are with wrong intention and by the professionals who merely repent or realize the consequence of their terrific act. Terrorism is an unforgivable crime and should be harshly punished. In conclusion, someone with no criminal record or with minimal misconduct must be treated differently than serious killers. The sole

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of the law is to maintain peace in the society, not to punish people.

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, unpaid community services are great chances for criminals to bring them back to their normal life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

280 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rehabilitation
Reintegration
Recidivism
Reform
Restorative justice
Incarceration
Community service
Public safety
Skill development
Moral obligation
Punitive measures
Economic efficiency
Social consequences
Corrective action
Non-violent offenders
Justice system
Public opinion
Victim restitution

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