New Homes Are Needed But The Only Space Available Is In The Countryside

To
carter
give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance
cater
to the growing
demand
for houses people are moving to
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
where there is ample space and scope
for
Suggestion
of
construction
.
However some
Accept comma addition
However, some
people are against
this
and believe that rural areas should be protected. But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
otherwise
and same will be
disscussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
in
this
essay. The cities are exploding with the overload of
demand
for houses and other building to meet the ever growing
demand
for roof over head and food
in
Suggestion
on
plate
Suggestion
the plate
of migrants. People migrate to cities in search of better jobs and
higher standard
Suggestion
a higher standard
of living without realising that cities are already burdened by growing population due to which they end up even worse. They don't find
suitable home
Suggestion
a suitable home
suitable homes
to stay
niether
after a negative statement used to indicate that the next statement is similarly negative
neither
another
they find a good job to provide food
to
Suggestion
for
their families.
This
problem can be solved with
construction
Suggestion
the construction
of houses,
appartments
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
, factories and shopping complexes in rural areas.
This
will make sure that ample of houses are available at reasonable rates and the
construction
activities will generate lots of jobs. One more problem can be solved with limited urbanization in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
is
of
Suggestion
about
pollution. Due to excessive
popullation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
populations
in cities they tend to produce high levels of pollution. If a little load is
transfered
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferred
to non-urban areas it will help
in
Suggestion
with
fair distribution of pollution
on
Suggestion
in
cities and
countryside
as
countryside
have thick forestation can compensate for limited greenery in cities. The issue of traffic jams will
also
be resolved to some extent as the concentrated colonies will get some relief from overpopulation. In cities like Mumbai and Delhi there are 4-6 people residing in 1BHK
appartments
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
which are suitable for a
couples
Suggestion
couple
. And all of them have some personal means of transportation which results in heavy traffic jams in the area. At
last
the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree
least
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that
construction
Suggestion
the construction
of houses in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
is the only solution to meet the
demand
for houses. But
this
should be done with a proper planning and without hampering the nature and culture of
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
. The focus should be
on
Suggestion
in
to
use of
renewable non
Accept comma addition
renewable, non
-polluting resources for electricity, rain water harvesting and fixed areas for plantation of trees are some steps that should be kept in mind.

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