Some people say that it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion

Today there is a big debate about whether it is important to keep our homes and places of
work
clean and organized.
First
, I will talk about why I think it is important to keep our living places clean and
then
I will go on to explain why
this
is
also
true for our
work
environments.
To begin
, it is essential to keep a clean house for several reasons.
Firstly
, it sets a good example for our children who look up to us for guidance and as role models, so when we demonstrate the skills necessary for success in life, we set our children up for success.
For example
, my 3 year old son plays at making his own bed after watching his mother and
I
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me
making
Suggestion
makes
ours.
Furthermore
, having a neat home helps with
time
management; take car
keys
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for instance
, if they are always returned to their proper place when not in use, there will never be that panicked, stressful
time
wasted in frantically looking for them when itʼs
time
to go somewhere.
Finally
, when our homes are clean it ensures health and safety. To explain, when our kitchens and bathrooms are hygienic, it prevents the contamination of our food and daily items with infectious organisms like e-coli or salmonella, which can do us harm.
Second
, when it comes to office and
work
space, it is equally important for them to be kept clean. The
first
reason is that we promote harmony with co-workers if we are
neat
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not
. No one likes to share space with a so called ‘slobʼ
For example
, in my previous office, there was a huge issue resulting from a co-worker's lack of cleanliness which resulted in the office having to be fumigated after cockroaches had colonized the manʼs desk.
Next
, organizational skills at
work
result in ‘climbing the corporate ladderʼ as they say. Bosses notice well organized and prepared staffers at promotion
time
, and those are the mice that get the cheese.
For instance
, I was once passed over for promotion in favour of someone with less experience because of my habit of leaving things to the
last
minute and not being prepared,
this
is what is referred to as ‘learning things the hard way.ʼ now I make sure to dot all my ‘iʼs and cross all my ‘tʼs. In conclusion, when it comes to cleanliness at home and
work
, I agree with the old saying that it is
next
to godliness, and that it is very important to ensure we are clean and organized in both places.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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