Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes?

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People or commercial constructors build homes for private dwelling or for commercial uses and the number is increasing rapidly as the demand for new buildings is increasing. In all cases of building a new construction
safety
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of
dwelling
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the dwelling
is important. It is
home maker’s
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the home maker’s
a home maker’s
or
contractors
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contractor's
responsibility
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to build houses complying with standard engineering requirements and building codes set by the respective governments. I believe that the
government
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should always be there to strictly enforce building codes, and in the case of non-compliance authorities should take punitive measures. Enforcement of the law is
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government’s
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the government’s responsibility
responsibility
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. Since non-compliance can not only cause hazards to the homeowners, but
also
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to
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for
tenants and if in a cooperative or apartment, many co-owners may suffer. The building codes are regulatory requirements concerning
safety
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and quality of the construction, use of space and others.
For example
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, in an earthquake-prone area, the buildings should not be very high and the design and structure must have higher earthquake resistance. Big houses and long buildings (
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
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academic
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Academic
departments, hotels and hostels) require dilatation every 15-20
meters so
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meters, so
that in a heavy earthquake, only part of a building collapses, not the whole.
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, the quality of the materials used in construction and electric wiring, and the gas connection should pass minimum
safety
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standards. Adequate entry & exit facilities and emergency
exist
move out of or depart from
exits
, fire extinguishers are
also
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very important is establishments like factories, hall rooms, discos, party centres. In cases of a wooden house, wood must be coated with fire-resistant paint. In large apartments, office buildings, hall rooms and lobbies of hotels, fire-barriers made of rubber and steel are used to prevent the spreading of fire.
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, in areas of frequent hailstorms, skylights must not be used, and if so, must be protected by steel shutters. Many constructors often tend to ignore the minimum
safety
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requirements to minimise costs which jeopardise people’s life. Many private homemakers do not know details of these standards and precautions. It is the
responsibility
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of the
government
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to disseminate
such
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essential knowledge and monitor the compliance of builders, developers and makers of houses.
However
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, the builders cannot avoid their
responsibility
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anyway. In conclusion, in
this
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modern world, the
government
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is ultimately responsible for its entire citizen’s
safety
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and
good life
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the good life
a good life
. It is
also
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the
government
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's
responsibility
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to enforce
strict building code
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the strict building code
. If the negligence of any
government
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agency jeopardises people’s life, the
government
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will be held responsible.
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