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Old people suffer from loneliness and health related problem. What are the causes behind this.

#people #loneliness #health
Undoubtedly, nowadays most of the decrepit old people face lots of problems because of less family support,
that is
 why their condition become deteriorating day by day and they always feel alone.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons behind
this
 problem and how to overcome
this
 problem in depth. There are many reasons behind
this
, but I will discuss some predominate one. Firs and the foremost reason
is
Suggestion
are
 that less family support. In
this
 modern era, everyone is busy in their work and even they do not have time for themselves.
Although
 the government works hard on
this
 issue of elder citizens and they make new houses for them where they could stay with other people the same as them to reduce the problem of loneliness. Free facilities should be provided to
the old
Suggestion
older
 people by the government.
However
, the government is busy with their work.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, only a few people being provided help to them.
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