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housing requirements have reached the skies, due to the increase in globalization
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As most of the big cities became the economical hub
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it
require
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requires
certain
manpower
to provide the outcome. The housing
shortage
in big cities push many
company
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companies
to
rellocate
become established in a new location
relocate
to another
city
and push people to live in a unsanitary situation.
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can be tackled by the government intervention of providing multi storage accomodation and expanding the
city
to the remote areas
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with
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the consequences of these housing
shortage
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shortages
will have
a
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an
impact on the
economy
of the
city
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As most industries and IT sectors
requires
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require
manpower
to provide the outcome
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these
shortage
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shortages
in the
manpower
will force the
investers
someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
investor
to move to another
city
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Consequently
diminishing the
economy
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these housing
shortage
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shortages
will create slums and
unsanitory
not sanitary or healthful
unsanitary
accomodation which spread deadly diseases to the
city
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These worrying
phenomenon
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phenomena
can be tackled by the
governments
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government
government's
intervention on the building multi storage building
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Multi storage building can accommodate many people
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thus
it can retain the required
manpower
to
sustian
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sustain
the
economy
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permision
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bed space
will provide
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
to enhance the real estate business
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Furthermore
, expanding the
city
in remote areas with all new accommodation and industry will develop the
economy
of society
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For instance
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Chennai municipality has solved the housing problems by creating a new industrial
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area
in remote places with accommodation to
sutain
lengthen or extend in duration or space
sustain
stain
sit-in
its
manpower
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All things considered
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the
governments
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government
government's
intervention will solve
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this issue
these issues
by implementing the new
multistorage
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multi-stage
building and remote industrial areas
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