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Nowadays

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housing requirements have reached the skies, due to the increase in globalization

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As most of the big cities became the economical hub

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require

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requires

certain

manpower

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to provide the outcome. The housing

shortage

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in big cities push many

company

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companies

rellocate

become established in a new location

relocate

to another

city

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and push people to live in a unsanitary situation.

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However these

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can be tackled by the government intervention of providing multi storage accomodation and expanding the

city

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to the remote areas

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To begin

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with

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the consequences of these housing

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shortage

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shortages

will have

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impact on the

economy

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of the

city

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As most industries and IT sectors

requires

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require

manpower

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to provide the outcome

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these

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shortage

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shortages

in the

manpower

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will force the

investers

someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns

investors

investor

to move to another

city

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diminishing the

economy

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. In

addtion

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

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these housing

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shortage

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shortages

will create slums and

unsanitory

not sanitary or healthful

unsanitary

accomodation which spread deadly diseases to the

city

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These worrying

phenomenon

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phenomena

can be tackled by the

governments

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government

government's

intervention on the building multi storage building

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Multi storage building can accommodate many people

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thus

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it can retain the required

manpower

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sustian

lengthen or extend in duration or space

sustain

the

economy

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, provide

permision

approval to do something

permission

on shard

bedspace

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bed space

will provide

oppurtunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

to enhance the real estate business

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Furthermore

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, expanding the

city

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in remote areas with all new accommodation and industry will develop the

economy

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of society

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For instance

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Chennai municipality has solved the housing problems by creating a new industrial

areas

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area

in remote places with accommodation to

sutain

lengthen or extend in duration or space

sustain

stain

sit-in

its

manpower

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All things considered

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the

governments

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government

government's

intervention will solve

these issue

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this issue

these issues

by implementing the new

multistorage

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multi-stage

building and remote industrial areas

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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274 words

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