The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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on the

british

of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture

British

road from 1888 to 2000, it is

convenient way

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a convenient way

to motivate the public to hire the other means of transportation as well as strict international rules and regulations

sholud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

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to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

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of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

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crisis. To commence with

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encouraging the people to cover their distance via public

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is more convenient method to solve

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mence

something that is a source of danger

menace

means

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, it will boost the economy of

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the country

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countries

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when

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of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture

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masses will

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change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically

travel

by using government buses and train

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they will pay for it.

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authorities can utilise

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income on

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the improvement

infrastruture

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

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nation

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the nation

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, reduction of private cars will provide friendly environment in the USA.

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government

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the government

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a race between candidates for elective office

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campaigns

to create

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having knowledge of

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disorder

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disorders

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as lung cancer and heart attack

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healthy

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the totality of surrounding conditions

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environments

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the relation of an owner to the thing possessed; possession with the right to transfer possession to others

ownership

can be alleviated by increasing the prices of cars as well as

legislator

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legislators

a legislator

can implement the strict laws in

ordar

(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed

order

to reduce its hiring number.

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it will slope down the business of selling companies as less people can afford to get cars

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but at

same time

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the same time

they achieve

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(of a person) possessing physical strength and weight; rugged and powerful

hefty

income from affluent masses.

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the authorities can

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fund

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funding

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manufacture

factories to make the non pollutant ways of

transport

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way

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more and more flocks can make their journey comfortable.

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engneering

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

engineering

students in many nations are making pollution free vehicles which

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bristish

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Bristish

rulers can indulge their regime to enjoy

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of them or themselves

their

voyage via public

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and technical

scholars

an educational institution

schools

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be motivated by providing scholarship schemes to invent convenient

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it will be beneficial for economic growth and

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of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

conditions of

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the British

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