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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 digital world, people are encircled with various types of advertisements. It is omnipresent
for
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in
 all, TV adverts, Social Media Marketing, billboards, Personal advertisements and
many
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much
 more diverse ways.
while
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While
this
 phenomenon is escalating to
extremely new level
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extreme new levels
extreme new level
an extreme new level
, people are in influence of it. In my view, it has more positive effects than harmful. Because of advertisements, people are aware of current products in
market
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the market
. At some extent, it educates the people and provides the knowledge. For an instance, In India serious disease like polio is no more and the major success goes to awareness campaign help by
famous personality
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famous personalities
the famous personality
a famous personality
 with the use of digital marketing and TV advertisements.
Moreover
, to bind user with interest usually companies display various new idea and it
add
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adds
is added
 major value in
entertainment world
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the entertainment world
.
However
, the critical impacts are
also
 not avoidable.
Firstly
, it exposes kids and young generation towards the violence and inappropriate content sometime.
Secondly
, Advertisements with various discounts and offers, make people lure to do impulsive shopping. Increasing obesity is
also
 one of consequence of
advertisement
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advertising
 of junk food.
In addition
, few times people get influenced by various advertisings and tend to work more to achieve never ending desire of buying stuff,
this
 approach add up to the stress and frustration.
What
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What's
 more, kids might suffer from harmful psychological effects when their parents are unable to afford various products shown in advertisements. To put
this
 in a nutshell, I can say that advertisement is
beneficial phenomenon
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a beneficial phenomenon
 with a number of insignificant drawbacks. In my view, negative advertising effects can be lowered with help of government using stringent approach and awareness campaigns.

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