Ques: Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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It is indeed true that being an eminent personality does have its advantages as well as disadvantages.

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, I think that people often try to manipulate the one with

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status.

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, the person, to protect his/her image, has to create a façade in front of the general public and have to live his/her life in private which results in mental disorders.

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, it is my belief that celebrity status has more negatives than positives which are discussed

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, there is an effort to build a cocoon around a well-known person ensuring that he is not aware of the ground-reality anymore. It is seen that a coterie usually surrounds a well-known person which tries to feed of the fame of the said personality. It ensures that the celeb only heeds to its advice and is cut off from everyone else. In order to

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its agenda, these gatekeepers usually try to control the only individual that matter.

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, a child actor’s life is dictated by his parents and he loses control over his decisions.

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, as these people are followed constantly by paparazzi everywhere, it becomes very difficult to go about their daily life. Since, many of these ‘stars’ have an image to protect based on which they get endorsements, they have to be extra careful to avoid an embarrassing situation. But,

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constant pressure of being watched and followed is mentally jarring.

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, it is seen that many of these celebrities face mental issues.

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, there have been multiple suicides by famous people, the cause of which was chronic depression.

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, there may be benefits

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as fame and money associated with

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status, but it rarely shields them from psychological disorders. To conclude, there may be numerous plusses when it comes to being famous like financial riches, but the desire to hold on to it does result in much more minuses. Various types of issues arise which sometimes are even fatal.

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, it is my opinion that there arise more problems from it than

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Ques: Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying social skills of teenagers and young adults. What impact does the internet have on the social skills of teenagers and young adults and what can be done to make sure that it does not harm their social development?

In some countries, more and more people are hiring personal fitness trainers, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes What is the reason for this Is this a positive or negative development

The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Children these days spend a lot of time apart from their parents because in many homes, both parents work. What problems can be caused by this? What are some ways to support such children?