Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some other people have not benefited from; to what extend do you agree or disagree.

It is undoubtedly that newly-invented technologies play a crucial role in society as a whole. While I agree that online networks have negatively impacted on people, I

also

believe that the

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importance

of e-communication is too obvious to be ignored in modern life. On the one hand, up-to-date technologies have its own disadvantage to the

people

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person's

lifestyle.

First

of all,

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these

tools lead to the dearth of social connection and decreased human interaction. It means that, as individuals have a tendency to spend a great of their time in using the internet, it is tough for them to have frequent contact and communicate face-to-face with people in real life.

Therefore

,

this

lack of communication leads to people is vulnerable to be isolated. Another drawback is that the possibility of people’ losing the concentration on their work.

For example

, people could be addicted to surf the web or shopping online, being indifferent to their responsibility and, thereby the quality of work decline.

On the other hand

, modern communication has a positive influence on society. One striking advantage is the newly-invented tools have revolutionized the way we communicate. Most of us have greatly benefited from e-mail or internet chat program

such

as Facebook or Twister. These incredibly useful technologies enable people to keep in touch with their loved ones in far away places.

Moreover

,

this

modern technology helps individuals to enrich their knowledge.

For instance

, people can gain access to any information with the click of a mouse

instead

of spending a day long in a library. In conclusion,

although

I concur with the negative of up-to-date tools for the whole social, I would believe that the positive effects of the modern communication are far greater.