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Some people feel that teacher training course can make anyone a teacher, while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be produced by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give opinion.

#people #teacher #course #anyone
The
teacher
 training
course
 is a well structured
course
 that focuses on developing individuals on the skills and qualities required to be a professional tutor.
However
, it's a fact that some people have these qualities naturally. These people tend to be good listeners, showing empathy towards their students, understanding how to communicate on a personal level
to
Suggestion
with
 each person and generally having the right attitude towards the profession. The training
course
Accept comma addition
course, however
however
 covers more than just the attitudinal qualities required to be a great
teacher
. There are
also
 the academic aspects, which may include: curriculum preparations, timetable organization, and other aspects which have been professionally researched and taught over the years. When you take a person, who has the right attitude and natural passion towards the tutoring profession, and they are well trained through the
teacher
 training
course
, I believe
this
 will breed the best possible teachers we can get. An excellent
teacher
 should be a combination of natural talent and passion, along with the required training.

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