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Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

#people #it’s #internet #access #life
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Now days, it is seen that technology becomes an inevitable part of our daily
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. Especially,
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. People have opined about without using
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 most advance thing from technology they can live
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 at the fullest. Not all of them are agreeing to
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 statement. In my opinion, depending on the
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 range
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 can be necessity to live
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 at the edge. On the one side, there is no doubt that the
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 is a
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 a blessing in the field of getting information. Whether it is regarding business, news about local or globally happening scenario or even finding remedies for health related problems. To start with, let's take an example of the teenage
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. We all know how the
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 expands over the years and how it helped to grow the social media platforms like Facebook, Twitter. As most of the teenagers are spending their leisure time over social media to chat with their friends or meeting new people. Along with they play lots of online games or even take part in online gaming as well educational competition. For them not having an access of the
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 is like they are living in the dark world.
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, for a business person,
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 is like a blessing. Those days are gone where marketing person comes to your house or they are distributing paper based advertisement of their product. Right now every marketing company prefer digital marketing for their product advertisement and its way to successful compared to traditional methods. On the flip side, for older generation means people between the
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 of above 55 are unlikely to accept changes.
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, they hardly use the
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 of people are mostly retired from work and inclined towards traditional way of communication with others. Inclusion. These reason
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 is not a vital thing to them. So based on the various
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internet
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 played a major role in individuals personal as well as professional growth.
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 why it's necessity to live
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 fully.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential services
  • remote work
  • freelancing platforms
  • real-time information
  • social media
  • online resources
  • continuous learning
  • streaming services
  • digital books
  • job opportunities
  • educational opportunities
  • modern communication
  • traditional media
  • real-time updates
  • informed decisions
  • internet access
  • social dynamics
  • digital divide
  • personal growth
  • global connectivity
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