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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

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In
this
competition
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competitive
 world, that’s true job demands are getting high and employee or employer
are
Suggestion
is
 more stressful than a few decades than before. Sometimes, we
work
 continuously through
days
Suggestion
the days
 and nights to achieve our goals at that time resistance and energy are running very fast and became ill. If we
work
 regularly, we can keep our bodies in stable state. In
this
 loads of
work
, we forgot to drink
proper amount
Suggestion
the proper amount
 of water sometimes forgot to enjoy the food because our
mind
 is in our responsibilities. When we are sick, we should not go to
work how
Accept comma addition
work, how
 important it is
;
Accept space
;
with
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in
 frustrated
mind
 we can’t perform anything very well. As an example, for a normal person a job will be done in 2 hours might
last
 up to 4 hours for
sick person
Suggestion
sick persons
the sick person
sick people
a sick person
.
Sick person
Suggestion
A sick person
Sick people
The sick person
 might even get a disease if he/she try to
work
 so much because energy is running very fast. If we don’t dare to take a
leave
 for a few days or a week, there might be a situation to take a
leave
 up
to
being one more than one
two
 months to cure diseases
.
Accept space
.
 Illness or Sickness is
natural thing
Suggestion
a natural thing
 and I believe no one won’t blame you if you aren’t
finish
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finished
 your tasks in time. We must take a
leave
 for a while from job to relax our body and
mind
. If we take enough
break
Suggestion
breaks
 to recover from illness, our body and
mind
 will be fresh and there are so many innovative ideas might come up to fresh
mind
. Jobs, responsibilities, commitments are important meanwhile our
mind
 and body are equally important to be
take
Suggestion
taken
cared
Suggestion
care
 off. Please don’t forget to take a
leave
 when
you
of you or yourself
your
 sick.
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